Directions: During the first half of the unit, you drafted a poem. For this assessment, you will revise some of the words, phrases, and punctuation in your poem to make it more effective. (W.4.5, L.4.3)
REMEMBER: An effective poem:
■ Uses words and phrases to convey ideas, images, and feelings precisely
■ Uses punctuation for effect
Now, begin revising your poem. Manage your time carefully so that you can:
1. Read the draft of your poem.
2. Consider the punctuation you have used and how it will affect the reader’s understanding of the poem. Then revise the punctuation to strengthen the message or emotion in your poem.
3. Consider the words and phrases you have used and how they will affect the reader. Then revise some words and phrases to create strong images or emotions for the reader
Highlight the changes you made. Then carefully recopy your poem below.