Revising/Editing 1 - Wagoner - Mitchell Wagoner | Laabri

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What change should be made in sentence 2?

Change especialy to especially

Change them to it

Insert it was after forest

Change near to neare

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Change watched to would be watching

Insert a comma after watched

Change his to their

Make no change

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Delete the comma after old

Change knew to new

Change his to their

Make no change

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Change world war to World War

Delete the comma after 16

Change reported to reports

Make no change

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Change decided to desided

Change his to their

Delete the comma after Roy

Change start to starting

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Change developed to developped

Delete the comma after movie

Change colleagues to Colleagues

Change them to it

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Change determining to determination

Insert a comma after goals

Change appreciation to apreciation

Change millions to million's