Revising/Editing 2 - Wagoner - Mitchell Wagoner | Laabri

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What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 2?

Insert them after spends

Change her to their

Change told to telling

Make no change.

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What change needs to be made to sentence 4?

Change appreciate to appreshiate

Delete the comma after shelter

Change easy to easily

No change is needed.

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What change, if any, should be made in setence 7?

Change Great Depression to great depression

Delete the comma after Depression

Insert a comma after history

Make no change.

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What is the best way to rewrite sentences 12 and 13?

Even though life was hard and many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.

Even though life was hard, many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.

Even though life was hard, and many people felt desperate, and Grandma's family discovered a secret.

Correct as is.

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What change needs to be made in sentence 15?

Change dad to Dad

Insert a comma after ways

Delete no

Make no change

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

Delete the comma after gifts

Change exchanged to exchanging

Change each other to one another

Make no change.

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 19?

Change favorite to favoritest

Change memorys to memories

Change when to which

Make no change

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What is the best change to make in sentence 22?

Change knew to new

Change grandma to Grandma

Change they to it

Insert a comma and quotation marks before that

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What change needs to be made in sentence 23?

Change She to And

Change sustained to sustaned

Change through to threw

Change nations' to nation's