#GRAMMAR 13.9 REDO

DID YOU IMPROVE FROM THE FIRST TIME?
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PART 1 of 1
DIRECTIONS:
1. In SIX of the sentences, insert a comma to correct the sentence. (6 points)
          *You may only add EXACTLY one comma.

2. In NINE of the sentences, remove a comma to correct the sentence. (9 points)
          *You may only remove EXACTLY one comma.

3. FIVE of the sentences are correct. For those sentences, write correct in the box. (5 points)

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A good way to begin learning about the history of the states, is to explore their names.

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The curtain rose slowly and the performance began.

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That doctor never turns away anyone, but welcomes every patient.

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Everything I like to snack on, is bound to have too much sugar.

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I had not seen Yosemite before so it took my breath away.

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Socrates achieved fame as a philosopher, and people still study his teachings today.

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Whoever crosses the finish line first, gets the trophy.

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The squirrel isn’t satisfied with its sunflower seeds, but tries to get into the bird feeder.

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The audience burst into applause and they kept applauding for ten curtain calls.

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The spy hoped to exit through the kitchen but the door was locked.

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Which grocery sack contains, the potatoes, rice, and beans?

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We tried to clean up the river but it was too severely polluted.

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I hope we’re including, Ralph, Manny, and Paul on the list.

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He will never forget that performance for it made him laugh till he cried.

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Suellen finished first in the race and also broke the record.

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I never would have believed it, had I not seen it.

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We had not heard about the tragic accident nor had we seen it.

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I love homework more than watching TV, so I am an anomaly.

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The king assembled his dukes, barons, and earls in a parliament.

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DID YOU IMPROVE FROM THE FIRST TIME?

PART 1 of 1

A good way to begin learning about the history of the states, is to explore their names.

The curtain rose slowly and the performance began.

That doctor never turns away anyone, but welcomes every patient.

Everything I like to snack on, is bound to have too much sugar.

I had not seen Yosemite before so it took my breath away.

Socrates achieved fame as a philosopher, and people still study his teachings today.

Whoever crosses the finish line first, gets the trophy.

The squirrel isn’t satisfied with its sunflower seeds, but tries to get into the bird feeder.

The audience burst into applause and they kept applauding for ten curtain calls.

The spy hoped to exit through the kitchen but the door was locked.

Which grocery sack contains, the potatoes, rice, and beans?

We tried to clean up the river but it was too severely polluted.

I hope we’re including, Ralph, Manny, and Paul on the list.

He will never forget that performance for it made him laugh till he cried.

Suellen finished first in the race and also broke the record.

I never would have believed it, had I not seen it.

We had not heard about the tragic accident nor had we seen it.

I love homework more than watching TV, so I am an anomaly.

The king assembled his dukes, barons, and earls in a parliament.

The classroom holds, desks, chairs, office supplies, and bookcases.