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DIRECTIONS:
1. Identify the conjunctive adverb in each sentence. (25 points)
*You may only put EXACTLY one word in each box for your answer.
2. Insert a semicolon and comma to correct the sentence. (25 points)
*Copy and paste the entire sentence into the box.
*You will insert EXACTLY one semicolon and one comma.
Conjunctive Adverb: The Hesperus sank moreover there were no survivors of the wreck.
Rewritten: The Hesperus sank moreover there were no survivors of the wreck.
Conjunctive Adverb: Dennis failed to follow the recipe consequently his pancakes did not turn out well.
Rewritten: Dennis failed to follow the recipe consequently his pancakes did not turn out well.
Conjunctive Adverb: We did not have enough money for the bus ride besides we enjoyed the walk.
Rewritten: We did not have enough money for the bus ride besides we enjoyed the walk.
Conjunctive Adverb: General Douglas MacArthur was a great leader in World War II similarly George Patton won military glory in that conflict.
Rewritten: General Douglas MacArthur was a great leader in World War II similarly George Patton won military glory in that conflict.
Conjunctive Adverb: Those clouds are lovely however they signal coming bad weather.
Rewritten: Those clouds are lovely however they signal coming bad weather.
Conjunctive Adverb: Dominique loves this ring moreover she actually has enough money to buy it.
Rewritten: Dominique loves this ring moreover she actually has enough money to buy it.
Conjunctive Adverb: You have to sit through a poor movie however a poor book you can put down.
Rewritten: You have to sit through a poor movie however a poor book you can put down.
Conjunctive Adverb: Diego has to give a speech today consequently he is very nervous.
Rewritten: Diego has to give a speech today consequently he is very nervous.
Conjunctive Adverb: Sheila loves math class similarly she appreciates learning about chemistry.
Rewritten: Sheila loves math class similarly she appreciates learning about chemistry.
Conjunctive Adverb: I’ve always wanted to fly indeed I’ve even dreamed about it.
Rewritten: I’ve always wanted to fly indeed I’ve even dreamed about it.
Conjunctive Adverb: It is raining otherwise we would be outside.
Rewritten: It is raining otherwise we would be outside.
Conjunctive Adverb: Akira paints magnificently moreover he’s even sold a few paintings.
Rewritten: Akira paints magnificently moreover he’s even sold a few paintings.
Conjunctive Adverb: Larry passed his driving test therefore he wants to celebrate.
Rewritten: Larry passed his driving test therefore he wants to celebrate.
Conjunctive Adverb: Denise is at swimming practice likewise Shawn is playing volleyball.
Rewritten: Denise is at swimming practice likewise Shawn is playing volleyball.
Conjunctive Adverb: Those new clothes in the store window look great nevertheless they’re too expensive.
Rewritten: Those new clothes in the store window look great nevertheless they’re too expensive.
Conjunctive Adverb: Let’s enter the dance contest, Teri furthermore let’s win it.
Rewritten: Let’s enter the dance contest, Teri furthermore let’s win it.
Conjunctive Adverb: Bart slept until noon then he had to explain why he was late for his weekend job.
Rewritten: Bart slept until noon then he had to explain why he was late for his weekend job.
Conjunctive Adverb: Guides led the visitors around the house then the party finally began.
Rewritten: Guides led the visitors around the house then the party finally began.
Conjunctive Adverb: That blue one might be a reliable car similarly the red one could run well.
Rewritten: That blue one might be a reliable car similarly the red one could run well.
Conjunctive Adverb: Cousin Martha has volunteered to help plan the party moreover she’s willing to bring refreshments.
Rewritten: Cousin Martha has volunteered to help plan the party moreover she’s willing to bring refreshments.
Conjunctive Adverb: I love philosophy indeed it makes me see everything differently.
Rewritten: I love philosophy indeed it makes me see everything differently.
Conjunctive Adverb: The old barn is beautiful hence I’ll sketch it for art class.
Rewritten: The old barn is beautiful hence I’ll sketch it for art class.
Conjunctive Adverb: Captain Ogden gave us a tour of his ship moreover he taught us how to steer it.
Rewritten: Captain Ogden gave us a tour of his ship moreover he taught us how to steer it.
Conjunctive Adverb: The Mongol hordes were powerful armies otherwise how could they have conquered so much territory?
Rewritten: The Mongol hordes were powerful armies otherwise how could they have conquered so much territory?
Conjunctive Adverb: The typhoon wrecked the shoreline moreover the wind damaged houses inland.
Rewritten: The typhoon wrecked the shoreline moreover the wind damaged houses inland.