#GRAMMAR 13.3 REDO

DID YOU IMPROVE FROM THE FIRST TIME?
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PART 1 of 1
DIRECTIONS:
1. In EIGHTEEN of the sentences, insert commas wherever necessary. (18 points)
          *Copy and paste the entire sentence into the box and then add in the commas.
          *You may only add one or two commas to your answer.
          *Look at the underlined portion of the sentence for guidance.

2. SEVEN of the sentences are correct. For those sentences, write none in the box. (7 points)

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His room to give you an example is covered with posters of explorers.

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I came too late for the award presentation unfortunately.

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By the way didn’t I meet you at the film conference last week?

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The ram made his way along the ledge stepping confidently.

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The detective that you met yesterday will be in charge of the case.

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Arturo who loves animals takes in strays all the time.

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The character that everyone mistrusted turned out to be the hero.

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My only sister who currently writes science fiction wants to write for television.

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Yes I see that you have improved your backhand a lot.

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This paint which costs far too much will not add anything to the room.

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My mother to tell the truth does not care about celebrities.

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By the way where were you when I came over?

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Danielle worrying about her performance did not hear me call her.

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Someone who really cares about plants should work in the school garden.

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Uh oh we missed the bus!

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The team made their triumphant way off the field yelling wildly.

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You could get to school another way; for example you could walk.

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Christo said he wanted to present something that people had never seen before.

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To prevent theft many homeowners have security systems.

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Hank talks all the time; on the other hand he usually has something interesting to say.

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The little dog with the jeweled collar was behaving badly.

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Disappointed by his performance Harry left the room.

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Shelby our tour guide with the zebra hat works at the zoo.

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To prevent computer damage use surge protectors.

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DID YOU IMPROVE FROM THE FIRST TIME?

PART 1 of 1

His room to give you an example is covered with posters of explorers.

I came too late for the award presentation unfortunately.

By the way didn’t I meet you at the film conference last week?

The ram made his way along the ledge stepping confidently.

The detective that you met yesterday will be in charge of the case.

Arturo who loves animals takes in strays all the time.

The character that everyone mistrusted turned out to be the hero.

My only sister who currently writes science fiction wants to write for television.

Yes I see that you have improved your backhand a lot.

This paint which costs far too much will not add anything to the room.

My mother to tell the truth does not care about celebrities.

By the way where were you when I came over?

Danielle worrying about her performance did not hear me call her.

Someone who really cares about plants should work in the school garden.

Uh oh we missed the bus!

The team made their triumphant way off the field yelling wildly.

You could get to school another way; for example you could walk.

Christo said he wanted to present something that people had never seen before.

To prevent theft many homeowners have security systems.

Hank talks all the time; on the other hand he usually has something interesting to say.

The little dog with the jeweled collar was behaving badly.

Disappointed by his performance Harry left the room.

Shelby our tour guide with the zebra hat works at the zoo.

To prevent computer damage use surge protectors.

I have the strangest feeling that something peculiar is about to happen.