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DIRECTIONS:
1. Identify the adjective clause in each sentence. (25 points)
*Do not include any punctuation in your answer unless commas are used to separate items in a series.
*Look at the number in parentheses to determine the exact number of words to put in the box.
2. In SEVEN of the sentences, insert commas wherever necessary. (7 points)
*Copy and paste the entire sentence into the box and then add in the commas.
*You may only add one or two commas to your answer.
*Make sure to include the end mark in your answer.
3. EIGHTEEN of the sentences are correct. For those sentences, write none in the box. (18 points)
Adjective Clause: Those players who can dunk the basket make basketball fun to watch. (5)
Rewritten: Those players who can dunk the basket make basketball fun to watch.
Adjective Clause: The tour guide told us to take the staircase that curves around the left side of the foyer. (9)
Rewritten: The tour guide told us to take the staircase that curves around the left side of the foyer.
Adjective Clause: My pen pal who lives in Hong Kong writes to me at least once a month. (5)
Rewritten: My pen pal who lives in Hong Kong writes to me at least once a month.
Adjective Clause: Our state flag which is red, white, and blue stands in the corner of the room. (6)
Rewritten: Our state flag which is red, white, and blue stands in the corner of the room.
Adjective Clause: The moment when the first debator begins speaking will be Jamal's cue to start the timer. (6)
Rewritten: The moment when the first debator begins speaking will be Jamal's cue to start the timer.
Adjective Clause: The lady whose car is parked in the driveway is named Zelda. (7)
Rewritten: The lady whose car is parked in the driveway is named Zelda.
Adjective Clause: The statue that Kurt sculpted will be displayed at the art show. (3)
Rewritten: The statue that Kurt sculpted will be displayed at the art show.
Adjective Clause: Pour the hot chocolate into the blue mugs which are sitting on the kitchen counter. (7)
Rewritten: Pour the hot chocolate into the blue mugs which are sitting on the kitchen counter.
Adjective Clause: The coffee table book that Aunt Rhoda received for her birthday has many beautiful pictures in it. (7)
Rewritten: The coffee table book that Aunt Rhoda received for her birthday has many beautiful pictures in it.
Adjective Clause: The hour when the performance begins is swiftly approaching. (4)
Rewritten: The hour when the performance begins is swiftly approaching.
Adjective Clause: Maria is attending the Irish step dancing class which meets on Friday nights. (5)
Rewritten: Maria is attending the Irish step dancing class which meets on Friday nights.
Adjective Clause: The school festival that we are planning should be fun. (4)
Rewritten: The school festival that we are planning should be fun.
Adjective Clause: Tom interviewed Mrs. Lewis who developed the international studies program. (6)
Rewritten: Tom interviewed Mrs. Lewis who developed the international studies program.
Adjective Clause: The bagels that the bakery sells are onion and poppyseed. (4)
Rewritten: The bagels that the bakery sells are onion and poppyseed.
Adjective Clause: The fish that occupy Gwen’s aquarium are a rare tropical breed. (4)
Rewritten: The fish that occupy Gwen’s aquarium are a rare tropical breed.
Adjective Clause: Everyone asked Tomaika for the recipe to make the salad that she brought to the carry-in dinner. (7)
Rewritten: Everyone asked Tomaika for the recipe to make the salad that she brought to the carry-in dinner.
Adjective Clause: Mr. Greenwood whose farm is located a few hours away plans to invite us back this year. (8)
Rewritten: Mr. Greenwood whose farm is located a few hours away plans to invite us back this year.
Adjective Clause: The second when the clock strikes midnight will signal the beginning of a new year. (5)
Rewritten: The second when the clock strikes midnight will signal the beginning of a new year.
Adjective Clause: As we drive through Missouri, I will show you the city where I grew up. (4)
Rewritten: As we drive through Missouri, I will show you the city where I grew up.
Adjective Clause: A little girl pointed to the spot where her kitten disappeared. (4)
Rewritten: A little girl pointed to the spot where her kitten disappeared.
Adjective Clause: Naylor Road which curves to the left leads to an old stone quarry. (5)
Rewritten: Naylor Road which curves to the left leads to an old stone quarry.
Adjective Clause: The bill that Representative Joyce introduced could help many needy persons. (4)
Rewritten: The bill that Representative Joyce introduced could help many needy persons.
Adjective Clause: Monique is the student who designed these shirts. (4)
Rewritten: Monique is the student who designed these shirts.
Adjective Clause: The desk that Philip bought appears to be an antique. (3)
Rewritten: The desk that Philip bought appears to be an antique.
Adjective Clause: George and Janet hosted a party that I will never forget. (5)
Rewritten: George and Janet hosted a party that I will never forget.