1. No 1st person (I, me, my) writing style. I should not see a sentence that says "I think that the Constitution" or "What I mean is..." Just say "The Constitution" or "The American people"
2. Write for Grandma - explain what you mean. This requires more sentences and clarity
3. Listen to the voices in your head - the thoughts going through your mind that provide clarity to you should be used in the DBQ
4. Details are your friends but Mr. Parry DOESNT KNOW THEM, so be sure to include them.
5. Documents don't talk so DO NOT SAY "the document says".
6. VOCABULARY MATTERS - Write clearly using the English language. Don't abreviate words, and work on learning how to use vocabulary words so that you can use 1 word that has a meaning behind it instead of having to explain yourself in a long sentence. Ex. I want you to be cognizant of writing expectations. I use that word instead of saying I want you to be aware of or have knowledge regarding writing expectations.
7. DO NOT write about what the documents have in them. Documents have facts that you look at and then use as examples to prove your point. This is NOT a DBQ about what the documents have in each of them. Writing this way equals an automatic ZERO. Be COGNIZANT so you don't waste your time and effort.
8. CITE all of your work. You are not an expert, you don't even have an educational degree. You are getting information to support your belief FROM a document someone else has provided who is an expert. You MUST cite the document as (Doc A) or (Doc B) or (Doc C) or (Doc D) at the END of the sentence. Failure to do so is stealing that work and is plagiarism and results in a automatic ZERO. Changing a word or two is still plagiarism so be sure to use your own words. Be COGNIZANT so you don't waste your time and effort.
Example: The American government under Federalism has a complex process of powers assigned to each branch. These additional powers form what is classified as "checks and balances", enabling each branch to exercise power over the other two branches to thwart their attempts at acting in a tyrannical manner (Doc C). For example, the executive branch has the power to Veto bills passed by Congress and prevent them from becoming a law that could endanger the rights of the American public (Doc C).
1. Intro Paragraph - Background information and Thesis
B. Supporting Detail for the topic sentence
B. Supporting Detail for the topic sentence
B. Supporting Detail for the topic sentence
A. Restate your thesis / argument
B. So What? This is where you need to summarize your main points.
MAIN WRITING GOAL: You need to be able to prove that the Constitution (the present form of the American government) is capable of guarding against tyranny at multiple levels.
Definition of Tyranny is the RULE of the one, the few and the many.
THESIS: The main goal of this DBQ is to analyze and explain how the Constitution guards against tyranny. This is the main thesis. We are focusing on the Political aspects in this DBQ. You must use all 4 documents.
Document B: Separation of Powers
Document C: Checks and Balances
Document D: Big state vs Small state
REMINDERS: Don't write in 1st person: I, WE, ME, US, YOU
It might be helpful to break the DBQ BODY paragraphs into the following areas:
Federalism - how does its structure stop tyranny?
B. How is power separated
Checks and Balances - how does this process stop tyranny?
A. What are they and why are they necessary?
B. How do they slow government
Congress and its danger - How does dividing representation stop tyranny of the big states?
A. Assigning House of Representative representation for states
C. How this process stops tyranny (if you have paid attention to what we do daily in the lab you'll have a good analysis to make)