Conjunctive Adverb: The old museum was drafty and rundown furthermore the exhibits were boring and outdated.

Rewritten: The old museum was drafty and rundown furthermore the exhibits were boring and outdated.

Conjunctive Adverb: The team uniforms faded in the wash consequently the school colors are now mint green and pale yellow.

Rewritten: The team uniforms faded in the wash consequently the school colors are now mint green and pale yellow.

Conjunctive Adverb: Our tour bus departed an hour late thus we arrived just before the aquarium closed.

Rewritten: Our tour bus departed an hour late thus we arrived just before the aquarium closed.

Conjunctive Adverb: The Tigers are talented moreover they have won the state championship three years in a row.

Rewritten: The Tigers are talented moreover they have won the state championship three years in a row.

Conjunctive Adverb: Mika doesn’t know much about opera still he would like to go.

Rewritten: Mika doesn’t know much about opera still he would like to go.

Conjunctive Adverb: Vern enjoys watching birds moreover he tries to attract them.

Rewritten: Vern enjoys watching birds moreover he tries to attract them.

Conjunctive Adverb: Many kinds of dogs are found at the animal shelter likewise cats are regular inhabitants.

Rewritten: Many kinds of dogs are found at the animal shelter likewise cats are regular inhabitants.

Conjunctive Adverb: Nina was unable to play tennis this season still she attended every match.

Rewritten: Nina was unable to play tennis this season still she attended every match.

Conjunctive Adverb: Margi had her braces removed however she must still wear a retainer.

Rewritten: Margi had her braces removed however she must still wear a retainer.

Conjunctive Adverb: All the holiday flights were booked consequently we drove to Chicago.

Rewritten: All the holiday flights were booked consequently we drove to Chicago.

Conjunctive Adverb: I enjoy watching old movies however Dan prefers the sports channel.

Rewritten: I enjoy watching old movies however Dan prefers the sports channel.

Conjunctive Adverb: Due to the flu, Kareem had missed several days of history class therefore he was excused from the test.

Rewritten: Due to the flu, Kareem had missed several days of history class therefore he was excused from the test.

Conjunctive Adverb: Janice loves to go shopping similarly Mai enjoys hunting for a bargain.

Rewritten: Janice loves to go shopping similarly Mai enjoys hunting for a bargain.

Conjunctive Adverb: My brother is very creative with his hands therefore most of the presents that he gives are homemade.

Rewritten: My brother is very creative with his hands therefore most of the presents that he gives are homemade.

Conjunctive Adverb: Bird watching is very educational besides it is great fun.

Rewritten: Bird watching is very educational besides it is great fun.

Conjunctive Adverb: There is a gazebo in her backyard also there is a garden.

Rewritten: There is a gazebo in her backyard also there is a garden.

Conjunctive Adverb: Jason moaned and groaned nevertheless no one would do his work for him.

Rewritten: Jason moaned and groaned nevertheless no one would do his work for him.

Conjunctive Adverb: Kara read three books on colonial dress consequently her costume looked the most authentic of all.

Rewritten: Kara read three books on colonial dress consequently her costume looked the most authentic of all.

Conjunctive Adverb: Everyone was restless nevertheless Hal continued his speech.

Rewritten: Everyone was restless nevertheless Hal continued his speech.

Conjunctive Adverb: I’ve lost my notes from yesterday’s class however there wasn’t much new material in them anyway.

Rewritten: I’ve lost my notes from yesterday’s class however there wasn’t much new material in them anyway.

Conjunctive Adverb: Mr. Min talked about beekeeping besides he brought samples of foods made with honey.

Rewritten: Mr. Min talked about beekeeping besides he brought samples of foods made with honey.

Conjunctive Adverb: Jeff submitted a terrific essay indeed he won first place in the writing contest.

Rewritten: Jeff submitted a terrific essay indeed he won first place in the writing contest.

Conjunctive Adverb: You may have the ice cream if you have finished the chores otherwise you can do without it.

Rewritten: You may have the ice cream if you have finished the chores otherwise you can do without it.

Conjunctive Adverb: The trio had a difficult time at the audition moreover their second selection did not work out very well.

Rewritten: The trio had a difficult time at the audition moreover their second selection did not work out very well.

Conjunctive Adverb: Doreen tore her jeans climbing the fence similarly Monty scratched his forearm.

Rewritten: Doreen tore her jeans climbing the fence similarly Monty scratched his forearm.