What change, if any, should be made to sentence 2?
Question 2
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Rafael does not think that sentence 3 is appropriate for this assignment. He does not think the tone is appropriate for his audience. How should he change the sentence?
Question 3
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What change, if any, should be made to sentence 5?
Question 4
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What is the best way to combine sentence 7 and 8?
Question 5
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Rafael wants to add a topic sentence to the third paragraph (sentences 13-16). Which of these would be the best topic sentencd for this paragraph?
Question 6
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Sentence 19 needs a transition word or phrase added to the beginning to connect it with the previous ideas. What word or phrase should be added?
Question 7
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Rafael would like to add the following sentence to the fifth paragraph (sentences 24-29).
That is why many animals have adapted to burrow into the sand or hang onto rocks.
Where is the best place to insert this sentence?
Question 8
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What change, if any, should be made to sentence 32?
Question 9
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What is the best way to combine sentences 34 and 35?
Question 10
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Rafael wants to look up some information to add to this paper. He wants to include more information about tidal zones in different parts of the world. What would be the best source for him to use to find this information?
J For many critters, this environment, called the intertidal zone, is one of the most challenging places to live on this big blue marble we call Earth.
J The driest zone, the part furthest inland, is called the spray zone because it receives only a spray of seawater during high tide.
