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Revising/Editing 2 - C
By Julia Cortez
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Question 1
1.
What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 2?
Insert
them
after
spends
Change
her
to
their
Change
told
to
telling
Make no change.
Question 2
2.
What change needs to be made to sentence 4?
Change
appreciate
to
appreshiate
Delete the comma after
shelter
Change
easy
to
easily
No change is needed.
Question 3
3.
What change, if any, should be made in setence 7?
Change
Great Depression
to
great depression
Delete the comma after
Depression
Insert a comma after
history
Make no change.
Question 4
4.
What is the best way to rewrite sentences 12 and 13?
Even though life was hard and many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Even though life was hard, many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Even though life was hard, and many people felt desperate, and Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Correct as is.
Question 5
5.
What change needs to be made in sentence 15?
Change
dad
to
Dad
Insert a comma after
ways
Delete
no
Make no change
Question 6
6.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?
Delete the comma after
gifts
Change
exchanged
to
exchanging
Change
each other
to
one another
Make no change.
Question 7
7.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 19?
Change
favorite
to
favoritest
Change
memorys
to
memories
Change
when
to
which
Make no change
Question 8
8.
What is the best change to make in sentence 22?
Change
knew
to
new
Change
grandma
to
Grandma
Change
they
to
it
Insert a comma and quotation marks before
that
Question 9
9.
What change needs to be made in sentence 23?
Change
She
to
And
Change
sustained
to
sustaned
Change
through
to
threw
Change
nations'
to
nation's
