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Revising/Editing 2 - C
By Julia Cortez
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Question 1
1.
What change, if any, needs to be made to sentence 2?
Insert
them
after
spends
Question 2
2.
What change needs to be made to sentence 4?
Change
appreciate
to
appreshiate
Question 3
3.
What change, if any, should be made in setence 7?
Change
Great Depression
to
great depression
Question 4
4.
What is the best way to rewrite sentences 12 and 13?
Even though life was hard and many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Even though life was hard, many people felt desperate, Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Even though life was hard, and many people felt desperate, and Grandma's family discovered a secret.
Correct as is.
Question 5
5.
What change needs to be made in sentence 15?
Change
dad
to
Dad
Question 6
6.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?
Delete the comma after
gifts
Question 7
7.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 19?
Change
favorite
to
favoritest
Question 8
8.
What is the best change to make in sentence 22?
Question 9
9.
What change needs to be made in sentence 23?
Change
her
to
their
Change
told
to
telling
Make no change.
Delete the comma after
shelter
Change
easy
to
easily
No change is needed.
Delete the comma after
Depression
Insert a comma after
history
Make no change.
Insert a comma after
ways
Delete
no
Make no change
Change
exchanged
to
exchanging
Change
each other
to
one another
Make no change.
Change
memorys
to
memories
Change
when
to
which
Make no change
Change
knew
to
new
Change
grandma
to
Grandma
Change
they
to
it
Insert a comma and quotation marks before
that
Change
She
to
And
Change
sustained
to
sustaned
Change
through
to
threw
Change
nations'
to
nation's
