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Rewriting Introductions cloned 5/13/2021

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3 questions

The following are examples of WEAK introductions and WEAK thesis statements. Add to them and change them until they are STRONG introductions and STRONG thesis statements. 

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Question 1

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Ronald Reagan was a president who was against communism and the Berlin Wall. Ronald Reagan convinces his audience with a comparison and making them inspired.

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Question 2

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In Flint Michigan, General Motors closed all the factories. The people were not good when they lost their jobs. Michael Moore persuades the people of his argument.

Question 3

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Frederick Douglass uses pathos to show that slavery is bad. Pathos is an appeal to emotion.