Revise the sentences below to properly incorporate a quotation that includes narration and dialogue. Remember, quoting a passage that includes both narration and dialogue requires you to break up the quoted text into smaller pieces!
Copy and paste the sample into the box and then edit it to reflect proper, academic style. Unlike the other examples, in this one you need to delete most of the quote in the original sentence.
Kingston describes her mother as someone obsessed with feeding her family. ""Eat! Eat!" my mother would shout at our heads bent over bowls, the blood pudding awobble in the middle of the table. She had one rule to keep us safe from toadstools and such: "If it tastes good, it's bad for you," she said. "If it tastes bad, it's good for you."" Her mother's intentions were good, but the foods she offered up were not in keeping with her children's American tastes.