English Interim 1 - 2021

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friday, February

Friday, february

Friday, February

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cutest

most cutest

more cute

Her coat is jet-black she has bright blue eyes.

Her coat is jet-black has bright blue eyes.

Her coat is jet-black, and she has bright blue eyes.

Her coat is jet-black and with her bright blue eyes.

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have been

was

are

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set it on the floor by the table, opened a can of tuna, and put it on a plate.

put it on a plate, set it on the floor by the table, and opened a can of tuna.

opened a can of tuna, put it on a plate, and set it on the floor by the table.

Everyone who comes to my house loves to pet Valentine.

Valentine also has a very soft tail.

Each member of my family has different interests.

Today, Valentine spends time with all of us in different ways.

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dads’

dad’s

dads’s

The narrator’s opinion about how Valentine’s purring feels

A picture of what Valentine looks like while purring

A list of times when Valentine purrs on the narrator’s back

An explanation of what a massage is

Yes, because it provides many examples of what to feed cats.

Yes, because it shows what different cats like to do for fun.

No, because it doesn’t show how to make new cats less shy.

No, because it instead describes one family’s relationship with a new cat.

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have used

had use

uses

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First of all,

Yesterday,

Today,

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than, most,

than most,

than, most

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blades’ called rotor’s.

blade’s called rotor’s.

blade’s called rotors.

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Even though wires

When wires

Wires

Where it is now

Before Sentence 1

Before Sentence 2

Before Sentence 5

An example of a place where pollution is a problem

A reason why wind turbines should not be used

The meaning of “clean” electricity

A description of things that cause pollution

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that is

being

is

Yes, because it describes how windmills from long ago looked compared to today’s wind turbines.

Yes, because it fully explains how windmills ground grain and pumped water without harming the earth.

No, because it focuses on wind turbines used today instead of on windmills used long ago.

No, because it focuses on how windmills long ago were built instead of on how they were used.