Research Project Part 6 9th Grade

Posljednje ažuriranje about 4 years ago

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Introductory Paragraph

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Body Paragraphs

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Concluding Paragraph

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Paraphrased Information

For this section, you will need to review your evidence (Concrete Details) used throughout your essay.

Go to your Google Doc and make the necessary changes.

Works Cited

For this section, you will need to refer to your Works Cited page.

Use the information above to check both your in-text citations, and your Works Cited paged.

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Word Choice

For this activity, you will need to read through your entire document to answer the questions. These questions apply to the entire essay.

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Sentence Variety

For this part of your revision, you will need to read through your entire essay.

Go to your Google Doc and revise your sentence lengths.

Transitions

For this part of the revision, you will need to review your entire essay.

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Mechanics

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Your Final Draft

You have spent a large amount of time revising your essay, and making it the best product you can. Use the rubric below to share how you believe you performed on this task?

Obavezno

250

Research Project Part 6 9th Grade

Posljednje ažuriranje about 4 years ago

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This part is designed to take you through the process of revising your essays, in a thoughtful, step-by-step manner.

Introductory Paragraph

Copy and paste Your Introuduction below.

Is your thesis at the end of the paragraph?

Yes

Is your theses clearly stated?

Yes

Is your thesis expository?

Yes

Is your lead engaging?

Yes

Do you start broadly?

Yes

Do you lead into your thesis in a logical manner?

Yes

What revisions do you need to make?

Make the necessary revisions in Google Doc.

Body Paragraphs

Copy and Paste Your Body Paragraphs Below

Are your topic sentences in the correct location?

Yes

Are your topic sentences clearly stated?

Yes

Are your topic sentences expository?

Yes

Are your topic sentences focused on the thesis?

Yes

Is the body of each paagraph focused on developing its topic sentence?

Yes

Are your points organized in a logical manner that fits the assignment?

Yes

Are your concluding sentences clearly stated?

Yes

Are your concluding sentences focused on the topic sentence?

Yes

Does your paragraph "sound" finished?

Yes

Are your points fully developed? Are there places where you cn add more details or offer further explanation? Look for places where you could do so.

Yes

What revisions do you need to make?

Make the necessary revisions in your Google Doc.

Concluding Paragraph

Paste your concluding paragraph below.

Did you restate your thesis at the begining of the paragraph?

Yes

Did you find a way to make your point with different wording?

Yes

Did you end in a broad way?

Yes

Did you answer "so what"? Did you leave your reader with reasons why your essay is significant?

Yes

What changes do you need to make?

Make the necessary changes in your Google Doc.

Paraphrased Information

For this section, you will need to review your evidence (Concrete Details) used throughout your essay.

Do you have 6 pieces of evidence in your essay? Here is an example: Indeed.com states the average salary is $43,000 a year (airline pilots).

Yes

Your essay has one commentary (elaboration) per your concrete details (evidence).

Yes

Does all paraphrased info support the points that you are making in the essay?

Yes

Is the information in your own words and voice?

Yes

Do you reference the source of your information in the text of your essay?

Yes

Have you included in-text citations where necessary?

Yes

Go to your Google Doc and make the necessary changes.

Works Cited

For this section, you will need to refer to your Works Cited page.

Do all of your entries have the required information?

Yes

Is all the information presented in the proper format?

Yes

Are you entries in alphabetical order?

Yes

Use the information above to check both your in-text citations, and your Works Cited paged.

What revisions do you need to make with MLA formatting and Citations?

Go to your Google Doc and make the necessary changes.

Word Choice

For this activity, you will need to read through your entire document to answer the questions. These questions apply to the entire essay.

Can you replace words like am, is, was, were, are, been with stronger verbs? For example: This essay is used by students, becomes students realize that...

Yes

Re-read uyour your essay and pay careful attention to your verbs, which one's need to be stronger?

When using evidence, have you over-used words like "says" "stated" "claims..." etc.

Yes

Do you have any unnecessary or overused words/phrases, like "in my opinion," "This shows that," "For example," "To begin..." etc?

Yes

Do you have any unnecessary that, which or who phrases/clauses?

Yes

Have you avoided it and there at the beginning of sentences?

Yes

Are you telling or showing?

Showing

Telling

Have you used specific details?

Yes

Have you used the best words for the sentence?

Yes

What revisions do you need to make to your essay?

Go to your Google Doc and make changes.

Sentence Variety

For this part of your revision, you will need to read through your entire essay.

Varied Openings: Nothing deadens an essay more than one with sentences that all start the same. For example, some writers always start with a subject and a verb; others over use introductory phrases. Read over your draft to see if yuou have varied the way you start your sentences?

My Sentences have varied openings.

My sentences have similarly openings.

Varied Sentence Lengths: Too many short sentences make writing choppy. Too many long, flowing ones make it hard to read. A good balance of short, medium, and log sentences create an essay that flows beautifully. Read over your draft and see if you have variety in the length of your sentences.

I have a variety in the length of my sentences.

My sentences are consistently the same length.

What revisions do you need to make to your sentences?

Go to your Google Doc and revise your sentence lengths.

Transitions

For this part of the revision, you will need to review your entire essay.

Reread -read each paragraph. As you do, note places where your ideas need better connections.

My ideas do not need better connections.

I need to make better connections between my ideas.

Look at each transition. Have you made the most effective choice?

I have made the most effective choices with my transition.

I need to change some of my transitions.

What changes do you need to make to your essay?

Go to your Google Doc and make changes.

Mechanics

Think about the spelling errors that you typiclly make. Carefully read over the essay to ensure there are none of those errors.

Take a moment to think about the grammatical errors that you typically make. Read over your essay to ensure that you have not made any of those errors.

My essay has no grammatical errors

My essay has grammatical errors that need to be fixed.

What changes do you need to make to your essay?

Go to your Google Doc and make the changres

Your Final Draft

You have spent a large amount of time revising your essay, and making it the best product you can. Use the rubric below to share how you believe you performed on this task?

Use the rubric to score your essay from a 10 to a 5. Write the number you feel best represents your work quality in the space provided below each category.

Introduction and Thesis Statement Score:

Body Paragraphs Score

Obavezno

250

Research Project Part 6 9th Grade

Research Project Part 6 9th Grade

Copy and paste Your Introuduction below.

Is your thesis at the end of the paragraph?

Is your theses clearly stated?

Is your thesis expository?

Is your lead engaging?

Do you start broadly?

Do you lead into your thesis in a logical manner?

What revisions do you need to make?

Copy and Paste Your Body Paragraphs Below

Are your topic sentences in the correct location?

Are your topic sentences clearly stated?

Are your topic sentences expository?

Are your topic sentences focused on the thesis?

Is the body of each paagraph focused on developing its topic sentence?

Are your points organized in a logical manner that fits the assignment?

Are your concluding sentences clearly stated?

Are your concluding sentences focused on the topic sentence?

Does your paragraph "sound" finished?

Are your points fully developed? Are there places where you cn add more details or offer further explanation? Look for places where you could do so.

What revisions do you need to make?

Paste your concluding paragraph below.

Did you restate your thesis at the begining of the paragraph?

Did you find a way to make your point with different wording?

Did you end in a broad way?

Did you answer "so what"? Did you leave your reader with reasons why your essay is significant?

What changes do you need to make?

Do you have 6 pieces of evidence in your essay? Here is an example: Indeed.com states the average salary is $43,000 a year (airline pilots).

Your essay has one commentary (elaboration) per your concrete details (evidence).

Does all paraphrased info support the points that you are making in the essay?

Is the information in your own words and voice?

Do you reference the source of your information in the text of your essay?

Have you included in-text citations where necessary?

Do all of your entries have the required information?

Is all the information presented in the proper format?

Are you entries in alphabetical order?

What revisions do you need to make with MLA formatting and Citations?

Can you replace words like am, is, was, were, are, been with stronger verbs? For example: This essay is used by students, becomes students realize that...

Re-read uyour your essay and pay careful attention to your verbs, which one's need to be stronger?

When using evidence, have you over-used words like "says" "stated" "claims..." etc.

Do you have any unnecessary or overused words/phrases, like "in my opinion," "This shows that," "For example," "To begin..." etc?

Do you have any unnecessary that, which or who phrases/clauses?

Have you avoided it and there at the beginning of sentences?

Are you telling or showing?

Have you used specific details?

Have you used the best words for the sentence?

What revisions do you need to make to your essay?

Varied Openings: Nothing deadens an essay more than one with sentences that all start the same. For example, some writers always start with a subject and a verb; others over use introductory phrases. Read over your draft to see if yuou have varied the way you start your sentences?

Varied Sentence Lengths: Too many short sentences make writing choppy. Too many long, flowing ones make it hard to read. A good balance of short, medium, and log sentences create an essay that flows beautifully. Read over your draft and see if you have variety in the length of your sentences.

What revisions do you need to make to your sentences?

Reread -read each paragraph. As you do, note places where your ideas need better connections.

Look at each transition. Have you made the most effective choice?

What changes do you need to make to your essay?

Think about the spelling errors that you typiclly make. Carefully read over the essay to ensure there are none of those errors.

Take a moment to think about the grammatical errors that you typically make. Read over your essay to ensure that you have not made any of those errors.

What changes do you need to make to your essay?

Introduction and Thesis Statement Score:

Body Paragraphs Score

Attached the link to your document below. You need to share your final draft with me.

In addition to sharing the link to your final draft, attach a copy of your essay here.

Copy and paste Your Introuduction below.

Is your thesis at the end of the paragraph?

Is your theses clearly stated?

Is your thesis expository?

Is your lead engaging?

Do you start broadly?

Do you lead into your thesis in a logical manner?

What revisions do you need to make?

Copy and Paste Your Body Paragraphs Below

Are your topic sentences in the correct location?

Are your topic sentences clearly stated?

Are your topic sentences expository?

Are your topic sentences focused on the thesis?

Is the body of each paagraph focused on developing its topic sentence?

Are your points organized in a logical manner that fits the assignment?

Are your concluding sentences clearly stated?

Are your concluding sentences focused on the topic sentence?

Does your paragraph "sound" finished?

Are your points fully developed? Are there places where you cn add more details or offer further explanation? Look for places where you could do so.