Connotations: "She Took My Hand"
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Rewrite this lame poem; replace the bold words with better words (think about the connotations). Replace other words if you’d like as well.
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She took (grabbed? grasped? gripped?) my handWe went out the doorA large green fieldof grass spread out before usShe walked ahead of meWe jumped over the hedgeThis was the startThis was also the endI had no plan for this occasionThere are no rulesThat scares me.
She took (grabbed? grasped? gripped?) my hand
We went out the door
A large green fieldof grass spread out before us
She walked ahead of me
We jumped over the hedge
This was the start
This was also the end
I had no plan for this occasion
There are no rules
That scares me.