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Investigating the Sneeze-Revising

Last updated over 2 years ago
7 questions
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In sentence 4, Quincy has attempted to provide a controlling idea for his paper. Which of the following could replace sentence 4 and more effectively state Quincy’s controlling idea?

15

Quincy is not pleased with his introduction to the third paragraph (sentences 14–20). Which of the following can replace sentence 14 and serve as a more effective topic sentence for this paragraph?

15

Quincy would like to add the following detail to the second paragraph (sentences 5–13). Where should this sentence be inserted?

The sneeze center then takes charge and sends the message to the many muscles that work together to produce a sneeze.

14

Quincy would like to provide some additional support for the idea he has presented in sentence 19. Which of these ideas could best follow and support sentence 19?

14

What is the most effective way to revise sentence 26?

14

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 23?

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Quincy has not used the most effective word in sentence 30. To improve this sentence, he should change feeling to —