Watch the video to learn how to make your work more descriptive and interesting. You will write a paragraph at the end about your experience going outside this past Monday (Early Release Day).
Question 1 | 00:38
Questions 2 & 3 | 04:39
Questions 4-6 | 05:45
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Question 1
00:38
Questions 2 & 3
04:39
Questions 4-6
05:45
Question 7
7.
Read this example that uses the senses. Using the tool, draw a line to the identified sense.
Question 8
8.
Using textboxes, write your observations here.
Question 9
9.
Type out about 5-6 simple sentences about what you saw, heard, smelled, touched, and tasted.
Question 10
10.
Using the previous sentences, how can you be more descriptive about your experience? Add vivid verbs and adjective. Use imagery to paint a picture. Write 8 or more sentences to describe the time outside.
Question 11
11.
Taking what you previously wrote, add a metaphor, simile, and personification to the paragraph. Do you remember seeing the ants swarming when we disturbed their home? What did the blue sky remind you of?
Question 12
12.
Question 13
13.
Type your completed paragraph. It should be 10 sentences or more.
Let's take a look. Click all that you do have. Fix what is missing.
Do you have all 5 senses in your paragraph?
Do you use vivid verbs?
Do you use descriptive, vivid adjectives?
Do you have a metaphor?
Do you have a simile?
Did you use personification?
Did you use imagery?
Did you capitalize the first word at the start of each sentence?
Did you put a period or proper punctuation at the end of every sentence?
