L14: Grammar "James Forten"

For the field trip I packed the following items, swim gear, including my goggles and a bathing suit, a lunch, as well as a snack, and plenty of sunscreen.

For the field trip I packed, the following items: swim gear, including my goggles and a bathing suit; a lunch, as well as a snack, and plenty of sunscreen.

For the field trip I packed the following items; swim gear including my goggles and a bathing suit, a lunch, as well as a snack and plenty of sunscreen.

For the field trip I packed the following items: swim gear, including my goggles and a bathing suit; a lunch, as well as a snack; and plenty of sunscreen.

After talking about the plot events, of the movie we discussed the characters.

After talking about the plot events of the movie we discussed; the characters.

After talking about the plot events of the movie, we discussed the characters.

After talking about the plot events of the movie we discussed the characters.

Can you please pass the carrots Robert?

Can you please pass the carrots, Robert?

Can you please pass the carrots, "Robert"?

Can you please pass the carrots; Robert?

If there is an early school closing the superintendent notifies, the local radio station, WXPL; the principals of the elementary, middle and high schools; and the public television station.

If there is an early school closing, the superintendent notifies the local radio station, WXPL; the principals of the elementary, middle, and high schools; and the public television station.

If there is an early school closing, the superintendent notifies: the local radio station, WXPL, the principals of the elementary, middle, and high schools; and the public television station.

If, there is an early school closing, the superintendent notifies the local radio station, WXPL; the principals of the elementary, middle, and high schools and the public television station.

While Mrs. Izumo checked out my books, I opened my backpack.

While Mrs. Izumo checked out my books; I opened my backpack.

While, Mrs. Izumo, checked out my books I opened my backpack.

While Mrs. Izumo, checked out my books, I opened my backpack.

Riley is planning, to join us, isn't he?

Riley is planning to join us isn't he.

Riley is planning to join us; isn't he?

Riley is planning to join us, isn't he?

Raccoons, squirrels, and snails live in my backyard.

Raccoons squirrels, and snails live in my backyard.

Raccoons squirrels and snails, live in my backyard.

Raccoons; squirrels; and snails live in my backyard.

“Yes I'd like some soup, please.” she said.

“Yes, I'd like some soup; please,” she said.

Yes; I'd like some soup please,” she said.

“Yes, I'd like some soup, please,” she said.

For homework last week, we had division, multiplication, and fraction problems; a story about two friends; and an outline for the science fair.

For homework, last week we had division, multiplication; and fraction problems; a story about two friends, and an outline for the science fair.

For homework last week we had division, multiplication and fraction problems a story about two friends, and an outline for the science fair.

For homework last week, we had division, multiplication, and fraction problems, a story about two friends, and an outline for the science fair.

If you would rather walk let's take; an umbrella.

If you would rather walk let's take: an umbrella.

If you, would rather walk, let's take an umbrella.

If you would rather walk, let's take an umbrella.