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CER Response and CERC Paragraph
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All Claims, Evidence, and Reasoning will be graded on this rubric:

**CER Response Rubric** Claim (3 pt)
  • The Claim answers the question.(1pt)
  • The Claim uses important words from the question (including the subject). (1pt)
  • The Claim is a complete sentence (with a capital letter at the beginning and a period at the end). (1pt)
Evidence#1 (3pt)
  • There is a Lead-in that introduces the quote (usually by saying, The author writes,) (1pt)
  • The Evidence is a word-for-word quote from the text (with "quotation marks" around it) (1pt)
  • There is an Author's Citation which contains the last name of the author (in (Parenthesis)) (1pt)
Reasoning#1 (3pt)
  • Reasoning explains how or why the evidence supports the claim. (3pts)
**CERC Paragraph Rubric** Claim (3 pt)
  • The Claim answers the question.(1pt)
  • The Claim uses important words from the question (including the subject). (1pt)
  • The Claim is a complete sentence (with a capital letter at the beginning and a period at the end). (1pt)
Evidence#1 (3pt)
  • There is a Lead-in that introduces the quote (usually by saying, The author writes,) (1pt)
  • The Evidence is a word-for-word quote from the text (with "quotation marks" around it) (1pt)
  • There is an Author's Citation which contains the last name of the author (in (Parenthesis)) (1pt)
Reasoning#1 (3pt)
  • Reasoning explains how or why the evidence supports the claim. (3pts)
Evidence#2 (3pt)
  • There is a Lead-in that introduces the quote (usually by saying, The author writes,) (1pt)
  • The Evidence is a word-for-word quote from the text (with "quotation marks" around it) (1pt)
  • There is an Author's Citation which contains the last name of the author (in (Parenthesis)) (1pt)
Reasoning#2 (3pt)
  • Reasoning explains how or why the evidence supports the claim. (3pts)
Summary/Conclusion (3pts)
  • A Conclusion is a summary of the paragraph or a sentence that restates the Claim in new words.
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Directions: Read the passage below. Then answer questions about errors in the passage.
  • Sam is an artist. He loves 1) paint and draw. He loves color. His 2) favrit color is bright green. Sam 3) builded his house. 4) He’s house has two bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom, and one big room. 5) A big room is Sam’s art room. The art room has many 6) window larges. Sam 7) like paint in natural light. Of course, 8) Sams house is painted bright green!
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The Cremation of Sam McGee

by Robert W. Service Poetry, 1907
  1. There are strange things done in the midnight sun
  2. By the men who moil for gold;
  3. The Arctic trails have their secret tales
  4. That would make your blood run cold;
  5. The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
  6. But the queerest they ever did see
  7. Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
  8. I cremated Sam McGee.
  9. Now Sam McGee was from Tennessee, where the cotton blooms and blows.
  10. Why he left his home in the South to roam ‘round the Pole, God only knows.
  11. He was always cold, but the land of gold seemed to hold him like a spell;
  12. Though he’d often say in his homely way that “he’d sooner live in hell.”
  13. On a Christmas Day we were mushing our way over the Dawson trail.
  14. Talk of your cold! through the parka’s fold it stabbed like a driven nail.
  15. If our eyes we’d close, then the lashes froze till sometimes we couldn’t see;
  16. It wasn’t much fun, but the only one to whimper was Sam McGee.
  17. And that very night, as we lay packed tight in our robes beneath the snow,
  18. And the dogs were fed, and the stars o’erhead were dancing heel and toe,
  19. He turned to me, and “Cap,” says he, “I’ll cash in this trip, I guess;
  20. And if I do, I’m asking that you won’t refuse my last request.”
  21. Well, he seemed so low that I couldn’t say no; then he says with a sort of moan:
  22. “It’s the cursed cold, and it’s got right hold till I’m chilled clean through to the bone.
  23. Yet ‘taint being dead—it’s my awful dread of the icy grave that pains;
  24. So I want you to swear that, foul or fair, you’ll cremate my last remains.”
  25. A pal’s last need is a thing to heed, so I swore I would not fail;
  26. And we started on at the streak of dawn; but God! he looked ghastly pale.
  27. He crouched on the sleigh, and he raved all day of his home in Tennessee;
  28. And before nightfall a corpse was all that was left of Sam McGee.
  29. There wasn’t a breath in that land of death, and I hurried, horror-driven,
  30. With a corpse half hid that I couldn’t get rid, because of a promise given;
  31. It was lashed to the sleigh, and it seemed to say: “You may tax your brawn and brains,
  32. But you promised true, and it’s up to you to cremate those last remains.”
  33. Now a promise made is a debt unpaid, and the trail has its own stern code.
  34. In the days to come, though my lips were dumb, in my heart how I cursed that load.
  35. In the long, long night, by the lone firelight, while the huskies, round in a ring,
  36. Howled out their woes to the homeless snows—O God! how I loathed the thing.
  37. And every day that quiet clay seemed to heavy and heavier grow;
  38. And on I went, though the dogs were spent and the grub was getting low;
  39. The trail was bad, and I felt half mad, but I swore I would not give in;
  40. And I’d often sing to the hateful thing, and it hearkened with a grin.
  41. Till I came to the marge of Lake Lebarge, and a derelict there lay;
  42. It was jammed in the ice, but I saw in a trice it was called the “Alice May.”
  43. And I looked at it, and I thought a bit, and I looked at my frozen chum;
  44. Then “Here,” said I, with a sudden cry, “is my cre-ma-tor-eum.”
  45. Some planks I tore from the cabin floor, and I lit the boiler fire;
  46. Some coal I found that was lying around, and I heaped the fuel higher;
  47. The flames just soared and the furnace roared—such a blaze you seldom see;
  48. Then I burrowed a hole in the glowing coal, and I stuffed in Sam McGee.
  49. Then I made a hike, for I didn’t like to hear him sizzle so;
  50. And the heavens scowled, and the huskies howled, and the wind began to blow.
  51. It was icy cold, but the hot sweat rolled down my cheeks, and I don’t know why;
  52. And the greasy smoke in an inky cloak went streaking down the sky.
  53. I do not know how long in the snow I wrestled with grisly fear;
  54. But the stars came out and they danced about ere again I ventured near;
  55. I was sick with dread, but I bravely said: “I’ll just take a peep inside.
  56. I guess he’s cooked, and it’s time I looked;” ...then the door I opened wide.
  57. And there sat Sam, looking cool and calm, in the heart of the furnace roar;
  58. And he wore a smile you could see a mile, and he said: “Please close that door.
  59. It’s fine in here, but I greatly fear you’ll let in the cold and storm—
  60. Since I left Plumtree, down in Tennessee, it’s the first time I’ve been warm.”
  61. There are strange things done in the midnight sun
  62. By the men who moil for gold;
  63. The Arctic trails have their secret tales
  64. That would make your blood run cold;
  65. The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
  66. But the queerest they ever did see
  67. Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
  68. I cremated Sam McGee.
Service, Robert W. The Cremation of Sam McGee. 1907. Kids Can Press, 2013.
The Creation of Sam McGee - Summary
Question 9
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CER Response Question
  • What is Sam McGee most afraid of? Cite specific details and figurative language from the poem to support your answer.
In the same answer box:
  1. Write a claim to answer each question
  2. Write evidence that supports the claim
  3. Write reasoning the explains why your evidence supports your claim
Use the CER Response Rubrics above when crafting your responses.

Question 10
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CERC Paragraph Question

  • As much as “The Cremation of Sam McGee” is about celebrating a certain period of North American history, it is also about mortality and death. What kind of attitude does “The Cremation of Sam McGee” have about mortality and death?
In the same answer box:
  1. Write a claim to answer each question
  2. Write evidence#1 that supports the claim
  3. Write reasoning#1 the explains why your evidence#1 supports your claim
  4. Write evidence#2 that supports the claim
  5. Write reasoning#2 the explains why your evidence#2 supports your claim
  6. Write a summary/conclusion that summarizes or restates your claim
Use the CERC Paragraph Rubrics above when crafting your responses.

"Sam loves 1) paint and draw"?
the paint and draw
do paint and draw
to paint and draw
"His 2) favrit color is bright green"?
favorit
faverit
favorite
"Sam 3) builded his house"?
built
had builded
was builded
"4) He’s house has two bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom, and one big room?"
He house has
His house has
Him house has
"5) A big room is Sam’s art room"?
An big room
The big room
This big room
"The art room has many 6) window larges"?
large windows
windows large
large window
"Sam 7) like paint in natural light"?
likes to paint
like to paints
likes the painting
"Of course, 8) Sams house is painted bright green"?
Sam’s house
the Sam’s of house
the Sam house