FIAB - Editing

A. During Middle School, students read several fiction and non-fiction titles that included books, novellas, plays, poems, magazines, and newspapers.

B. Students in Miss Comet’s class enjoyed reading Sports Illustrated Kids and The Railway Children.

C. Popular titles in Mrs. Alvin’s class were Esperanza Rising and Of Mice And Men.

D. Popular titles in Mr. Bailey’s class were National Geographic and othello.

A. The neighbors bought a red, rubber ball for their niece.

B. The students read a funny, entertaining book after school.

C. The child ate the most deliciously, juicy peach for her snack.

D. The strangely, quiet man seemed to be thinking about what to

say.

A. While standing patiently at the corner bus stop, a speeding delivery truck splashed water on the two girls.

B. While the two girls stand patiently at the corner bus stop, a speeding delivery truck splashed water on them.

C. While the two girls stood patiently at the corner bus stop, a speeding delivery truck splashed water on them.

D. While the two girls were standing patiently at the corner bus stop, a speeding delivery truck splashes water on them.

A. At ten, my family and I moved to the city.

B. My family moved to the city at the age of ten.

C. When I was ten, my family moved to the city.

D. At the age of ten, to the city my family moved.

When six years old, my father bought a trampoline for our backyard.

While waiting for a taxi, the rain started coming down very heavily and ruined my shoes.

Peter hisself is the cause of all his problems at work and can blame no one else for not getting the promotion.

The students themselves decided to organize an after-school tutoring session to make sure they were prepared for the test on Friday.

At the end of the school year, all students have the oppurtunity to

go on a class trip.

The six-day journey will include a visit to our nation's capitall in

Washington, D.C.

When they arrive in New York City, students will eat at a restaurant known for its tasty deserts.

Students will see some truly amazing scenery on their five-hour bus ride along the coast.

A. Peter's grandmother makes the most apetizing desserts.

B. Her cat spent hours licking its whiskers after it ate its food.

C. Maria loves that restaurant, but Virginia has never been their.

D. Her friends are all going to a fashon show, and she would really like to go, too.