Mariah has included a sentence that does not belong in the second paragraph
(sentences 5-11). Which sentence should she remove?
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The meaning of sentence 21 can be improved by changing They to-
What is the BEST way to rewrite the idea in sentence 25?
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 12?
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 21?