Formative Assessment Draft: Revision (3/3/2025)

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Defend your answer to #1. List 2-3 reasons why the answer you chose shows more significant changes.

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Formative Assessment Draft: Revision (3/3/2025)

Last updated about 1 year ago

5 questions

Instructions

Compare these 2 examples of revising a thesis statement. Which shows more evidence of detailed, thoughtful change?

"The bug in Metamorphosis shows that being an outsider is universal because he eventually died from the abuse and neglect his family showed him."

Defend your answer to #1. List 2-3 reasons why the answer you chose shows more significant changes.

Stargazing is fun because you can see the night sky and admire all the different constellations. If you time it well, you might even see a meteor shower. when stargazing, it is important that you go to a dark place. This should be far away from the city or any Street lights. Several planets are visible at different times of night, and especially right after sunset. There are even apps that help you scan the night sky and find where different constellations are located. Stargazing gives people an opportunity to see how the heavens proclaim the glory of god, like psalm 19:1. You have to go on a clear night to stargaze, but it's worth it.

Write a 2-3 sentence comment on the above paragraph excerpt as though to a peer that would provide useful and constructive feedback, especially when considering the structure, logic, flow, and detail of the paragraph.

Set a timer for 3 minutes and write without stopping for those 3 minutes.
Minimum word count: 70
Prompt: What is a recent personal experience that has caused you to learn and grow?

Rewrite your above paragraph, making at least 6 changes that consider items such as transitions, surface-level proofreading, clarity, and cohesiveness.

Formative Assessment Draft: Revision (3/3/2025)

Defend your answer to #1. List 2-3 reasons why the answer you chose shows more significant changes.

Formative Assessment Draft: Revision (3/3/2025)

Compare these 2 examples of revising a thesis statement. Which shows more evidence of detailed, thoughtful change?"The bug in Metamorphosis shows that being an outsider is universal because he eventually died from the abuse and neglect his family showed him."

Defend your answer to #1. List 2-3 reasons why the answer you chose shows more significant changes.

Write a 2-3 sentence comment on the above paragraph excerpt as though to a peer that would provide useful and constructive feedback, especially when considering the structure, logic, flow, and detail of the paragraph.

Set a timer for 3 minutes and write without stopping for those 3 minutes.Minimum word count: 70Prompt: What is a recent personal experience that has caused you to learn and grow?

Rewrite your above paragraph, making at least 6 changes that consider items such as transitions, surface-level proofreading, clarity, and cohesiveness.

Compare these 2 examples of revising a thesis statement. Which shows more evidence of detailed, thoughtful change?"The bug in Metamorphosis shows that being an outsider is universal because he eventually died from the abuse and neglect his family showed him."

Write a 2-3 sentence comment on the above paragraph excerpt as though to a peer that would provide useful and constructive feedback, especially when considering the structure, logic, flow, and detail of the paragraph.

Set a timer for 3 minutes and write without stopping for those 3 minutes.Minimum word count: 70Prompt: What is a recent personal experience that has caused you to learn and grow?

Rewrite your above paragraph, making at least 6 changes that consider items such as transitions, surface-level proofreading, clarity, and cohesiveness.

Compare these 2 examples of revising a thesis statement. Which shows more evidence of detailed, thoughtful change?

"The bug in Metamorphosis shows that being an outsider is universal because he eventually died from the abuse and neglect his family showed him."

Set a timer for 3 minutes and write without stopping for those 3 minutes.
Minimum word count: 70
Prompt: What is a recent personal experience that has caused you to learn and grow?

Compare these 2 examples of revising a thesis statement. Which shows more evidence of detailed, thoughtful change?

"The bug in Metamorphosis shows that being an outsider is universal because he eventually died from the abuse and neglect his family showed him."

Set a timer for 3 minutes and write without stopping for those 3 minutes.
Minimum word count: 70
Prompt: What is a recent personal experience that has caused you to learn and grow?