This is a closed book, closed notes quiz. Time limit is 40 minutes, due at the end of class today!
Defend your answer to #1. List 2-3 reasons why the answer you chose shows more significant changes.
Compare these 2 examples of revising a thesis statement. Which shows more evidence of detailed, thoughtful change?
"The bug in Metamorphosis shows that being an outsider is universal because he eventually died from the abuse and neglect his family showed him."
Write a 2-3 sentence comment on the above paragraph excerpt as though to a peer that would provide useful and constructive feedback, especially when considering the structure, logic, flow, and detail of the paragraph.
Set a timer for 3 minutes and write without stopping for those 3 minutes.
Minimum word count: 70
Prompt: What is a recent personal experience that has caused you to learn and grow?
Rewrite your above paragraph, making at least 6 changes that consider items such as transitions, surface-level proofreading, clarity, and cohesiveness.