Tonya would like to replace sentence 21 with a sentence that better states the controlling idea of her paper. Which of these would be the BEST replacement for sentence 20?
Question 2
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What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 9?
Question 3
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Tonya has included an extraneous sentence in the third paragraph (sentences 10 - 13). Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?
Question 4
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Sentence 11 has a problem with parallel structure. Which two changes need to be made to correct this sentence?
Question 5
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Which of these corrects the comma splice error in Sentence 16 by using a conjunctive adverb?
Question 6
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Sentence 17 has a problem with a word used incorrectly. What change needs to be made to correct this error?