MAP Mon #4-Writing Test Prep - Be Responsible

Schools should be like society, and they must get students prepared for it.

Schools must be a reflection of society in each and every way, if possible.

Being in school must have an effect on the futures of each and every student.

Schools must reflect societal behavior and norms, and prepare students for their inevitable futures.

Yes, children do need about 8 hours of sleep a night, but they also need to learn responsibility.

Yes, you are right, children need sleep and they also need responsibility.

Of course children need about 8 hours of sleep a night, but they need to be responsible for other things too.

Being responsible is much more important than getting enough sleep.

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Change accountant to accountants, and financial analyst to financial analysts

Change position to worker, and arrive to arrives

Change any to few, and position to positions

Change most likely to more likely, and arrive to arrived

They would have trouble concentrating on the task at hand, and they wouldn’t accomplish the requirements for the position.

They would have trouble concentrating on the task at hand. Therefore, they wouldn’t accomplish the requirements for the position.

They would have trouble concentrating on the task at hand, otherwise, they wouldn’t accomplish the requirements for the position.

The sentence is written correctly.

Change manner to manor

Change permitted to promoted

Change would keep to kept

The sentence is written correctly.