Umer wants to help readers move from the first paragraph (sentences 1−7) to the second paragraph (sentences 8−11). Which sentence should Umer insert at the end of the first paragraph?
Which sentence should be inserted between sentence 3 and sentence 4 to provide a more
coherent introduction?
Umer wants to improve the cohesiveness of his story by using repetition. Which of these is the BEST revision of sentence 9?
Umer wants to make a connection between the kitten’s name and the rest of the story in sentence 14. Which would make the BEST name for the kitten?
Umer has not chosen the most descriptive word in sentence 16. Umer should change
fun to —
Bruce would like to add a transition to the beginning of sentence 9. Which transition should Bruce add?
Bruce needs a more effective transition at the beginning of sentence 11. Which transition should replace Later?
Which transition should be added to the beginning of sentence 14?
Which sentence should Bruce insert between sentence 16 and sentence 17 to improve the
coherence of his conclusion?