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Revising and Rewriting Classwork
By Jasmine Flowers
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Question 1
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Which of the following transitions should be added to the beginning of the sentence 9 to improve the transition from sentence 8 to 9?
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Question 2
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Which sentence should be removed from the passage?
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Question 3
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Where does this sentence best fit?
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Question 4
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For which paragraph in the rough draft would this be the best concluding sentence?
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Question 6
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Which sentence should be removed from the passage?
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Question 8
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Which of the following revisions would make this sentence more specific?
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Question 10
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Question 5
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Which sentence should be removed to improve the flow of ideas?
Most rivers and lakes are sources of fresh water.
The rest of the Earth is made up of ocean water that humans and most other living beings cannot drink.
Another way to save water is to collect rain water and use it for bathing, washing. or cleaning.
As a result, many people fall sick or die due to water-related diseases.
Question 7
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The best way to provide a transition between sentences 11 and 12 would be to replace the word "The" with which of these transitions?
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Question 9
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Which of the following revisions would make sentence 6 more specific?
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