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"The City's" reflective, romantic tone creates a sentimental mood that intensifies its appeal to pathos. Before the lovers spot each other, we hear the usual noise of a crowded city. As soon as the man snaps the first photo of his beloved, however, the din cuts off and a gentle love song plays instead. The sudden contrasts between noise, silence, and music suggest both that the lovers have entered their own dream-like, perfect world. By switching to romantic music at the instant that the lover takes a picture, the ad implies that the iPhone 7 helps create that private world. Just before it ends, the ad displays the man's photos: many portraits of his beloved (Apple). The portraits are all romantic close-ups which emphasize the woman's beauty. Her pensive expression invites the audience to share a thoughtful, sentimental mood, while the soft focus on her face suggests how attractive the man finds her. Once again, the iPhone 7 helps the lovers express their feelings. The ad wants to persuade its audience that the phone can be a tool for building and sustaining romance.