Let's break down your thesis to make sure you're on the right track.
What is a thesis statement designed to do?
What is a common mistake when writing a thesis?
Write the thesis statement for your essay below
Type below the name of the person you are blaming for the death of Romeo and Juliet.
Example: Paris
Write Reason #1 for blaming your character (this should not include any analysis—just a simple version of why this person is to blame)
Example: Paris tried to marry Juliet without asking Juliet first.
Write Reason #2 for blaming your character (this should not include any analysis—just a simple version of why this person is to blame)
Example: Paris wanted to rush Juliet's father into allowing the marriage to Juliet.
Write Reason #3 for blaming your character (this should not include any analysis—just a simple version of why this person is to blame)
Example: Paris ignored Juliet's emotional distress over Tybalt’s death
Now, add all of your pieces together to get your final thesis statement.
Blank #1: the person you're blaming
Blank #2: the first reason for blame (only include the reason, as you already said the name of your character)
Blank #3: the second reason for blame (only include the reason, as you already said the name of your character)
Blank #4: the final reason for blame (only include the reason, as you already said the name of your character)
Finally, rewrite your thesis statement using what you've pieced together above and submit.