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A Day at the Science Museum

Paragraph 1:
(1) Last Friday, our fifth-grade class took a field trip to the science museum. (2) Everyone was excited. (3) We got on the bus. (4) The bus ride was long. (5) We talked with our friends. (6) We finally arrived at the museum.

Paragraph 2:
(7) Our class visited the dinosaur exhibit. (8) We saw enormous dinosaur skeletons and learned about animals that lived millions of years ago. (9) The fossils were interesting. (10) We ate lunch in the museum courtyard. (11) Before visiting the dinosaur exhibit, our class explored the space exhibit. (12) We learned how astronauts live and work in space.

Paragraph 3:
(13) At the end of the day, we returned to school. (14) I liked the museum. (15) I learned many new things. (16) The trip was fun. (17) I hope our class can visit another museum in the future.

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1. Which revision BEST combines sentences 2 and 3 into a compound sentence?

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2. Which sentence should be moved to make Paragraph 2 more organized and logical?

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3. Which revision BEST improves the clarity of sentences 14 and 15?

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4. Which revision BEST combines sentences 4 and 5 and improves the flow of Paragraph 1?