REVISING AND EDITING 2

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16 questions
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What is the BEST way to combine sentences 6 and 7?

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What is the BEST way to revise sentence 9?

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Kenny realizes that there is a sentence in the third paragraph (sentences 11–18) that does not belong. Which sentence should Kenny delete from this paragraph?

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The meaning of sentence 23 is unclear. Kenny can clarify the meaning of this sentence by changing they to —

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What change should be made in sentence 2?

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What change should be made in sentence 7?

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What change needs to be made in sentence 8?

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What is the correct way to write sentences 13 and 14?

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What change, if any, should be made in sentence 19?

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What change should be made in sentence 23?

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What change needs to be made in sentence 8?

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What change should be made in sentence 15?

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What is the correct way to write sentence 17?

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How should sentence 21 be changed?

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What change needs to be made in sentence 24?

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What is the correct way to write sentence 34?