Daily Paragraph Editing Week 1

Correct the paragraph below:

People the world over has been flying kites for centuries in fact, kites were invented over tow thousand years ago! one ancient story tells of a chinese general his army was trying to overthrow a cruel emperor. the general made a kite he tied a not in the string Next, his soldiers flew it in the direciton of the palace When the kite was over the palace the general marked the string and reeled in the kite